Good work overall. Don't have too much to mention as you hit the mark on every technical aspect well enough to deliver a pretty entertaining tron. Thought you were smart with your clip selection and your editing was really nice overall. Not a big fan of crossfades unless it's needed and felt the song didn't call for them. More of personal preference though. Good stuff.
Do wish you could've done a bit more to fill out the beginning 16 seconds. That's a major amount of time for an entrance video, so that alone can draw people off your video. Everything after that was pretty decent though. Technique was there, but a tad too robotic and slow when compared to the song. When compared to your Okada tron you made a while back, I do think you've taken a safer approach with your editing and believe it's hindering your progress a bit. Try to take more chances with your work and believe in your talents as you have a lot of it.
Really like how you went with this tron without much footage of heel DIY, yet I would recommend that you wait until DIY gets more footage other then that, nice job -EXPLICIT-
Syncing - 8/10
Pacing - 6/10
Clip Selection - 8/10
Presentation/Aesthetic - 7/10
Overall Entertainment - 7.5/10
Liked it, just thought that pacing could be better but i understand you were trying to sync to the drums, but overall it wasn't that bad