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Topic Started: Apr 19 2010, 07:21 PM (316 Views)
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AJ Lee <333
New poster.

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As you know, I suck at this, but I'll give you my opinion. I like the text and the lighting, but the three guys on the right all kind of blend into each other. Maybe tone down the contrast a bit or something, so that they don't all look like one conjoined person... If that made any sense. Still, I do like it. Nice work.
Oh, it's been too long, hasn't it?

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Apr 19 2010, 07:24 PM
As you know, I suck at this, but I'll give you my opinion. I like the text and the lighting, but the three guys on the right all kind of blend into each other. Maybe tone down the contrast a bit or something, so that they don't all look like one conjoined person... If that made any sense. Still, I do like it. Nice work.
Ya, i understood what you meant. Didn't even notice that.
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Any more Feedback ?
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the bottom half of this looks decent, text could be better. I don't know why you made their faces so bright, really brings this down. The two guys in the middle look conjoined, fucked up looking. Background doesn't really go with the bright red and yellow of the floor either.
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It's not too good to be honest. The picture is placed too high causing there to be too much space at the bottom. There also seems to be a contrasting in styles as the bottom part feels pretty grungy with warm colors while the top part feels a bit cleaner with not as warm colors. Text is pretty bad and not fitting. Also, this might just be a personal thing but I really don't like posters with the full band because it lacks a focal point. No real person stands out and to me there should be something to stand out in graphics. Overall just keep at it, you show some potential.
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Apr 21 2010, 08:56 PM
It's not too good to be honest. The picture is placed too high causing there to be too much space at the bottom. There also seems to be a contrasting in styles as the bottom part feels pretty grungy with warm colors while the top part feels a bit cleaner with not as warm colors. Text is pretty bad and not fitting. Also, this might just be a personal thing but I really don't like posters with the full band because it lacks a focal point. No real person stands out and to me there should be something to stand out in graphics. Overall just keep at it, you show some potential.
Its funny that you don't remember me.
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Who said I didn't?
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Apr 22 2010, 06:58 AM
Who said I didn't?
Just seemed like it. Have i improved for you helping me ?
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