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Randy Orton - Screwed; Feedbacks are needed
Topic Started: Apr 26 2010, 03:07 PM (634 Views)
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Edited by KamranKmD, Apr 27 2010, 12:09 PM.
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I saw what you were going for with this, but I just don't think you pulled it off. The idea was nice, but I felt a few things brought this down, first off the text, the text looked really amature and the color you chose didn't really fit in with this. The fx on the actual pic was a bit too much. This is the first gfx I saw from you, you show potential just keep at it.
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In a short response, I feel that if you take away the text you'll have a nice, simple, and clean gfx that tells a story. Just my opinion.
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Thanks to both of you, i'll try to do better job next time, but i need to get photoshop cs4 first...
Anybody else ??
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Like the idea, but isn't pulled off fully. The positioning is good, but the cut is very noticeable. Too much white in this aswell, so could'ved lightened the FX some in this. Text needs abit more work aswell. Too basic-looking and the gradient you applied doesn't look too good either. Idea was there, but the piece overall looks abit sloppy and undone. But keep working on it.

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Pretty awesome graphic, but I agree with those who say take the text away, it kind off ruins the image..
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The idea you was going for was awesome but you didn't pull it off like everyone said, but in my opinion the Text isn't that bad
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thanks to everybody for taking time to give a real feeback
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Apr 29 2010, 04:34 PM
but i need to get photoshop cs4 first
you dont need a more updated version lol i used cs3 for the longest time and its good enough, imo theres not much difference fro cs3 cs4 or cs5
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May 4 2010, 05:09 AM
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Apr 29 2010, 04:34 PM
but i need to get photoshop cs4 first
you dont need a more updated version lol i used cs3 for the longest time and its good enough, imo theres not much difference fro cs3 cs4 or cs5
ya i know, but my problem is that i don't even have photoshop cs(any version), right now i make gfx with photoshop 7... IT IS EPIC FAILED b-^
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May 4 2010, 05:09 AM
ManiaArts
Apr 29 2010, 04:34 PM
but i need to get photoshop cs4 first
you dont need a more updated version lol i used cs3 for the longest time and its good enough, imo theres not much difference fro cs3 cs4 or cs5
ya i know, but my problem is that i don't even have photoshop cs(any version), right now i make gfx with photoshop 7... IT IS EPIC FAILED b-^
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