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Randy Orton Wallpaper[W.I.P]
Topic Started: Sep 25 2010, 11:23 PM (363 Views)
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te text is fucking sweet best text ive ever seen the fading is awsome, the back ground and color scheme fits it i love it basically
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This is ok, but your background is abit messy imo. Way too much going on with no real purpose or meaning for the textures and C4D's used in this. Idea for your text is solid, but wasn't pulled off that well imo, so would just suggest to keep practicing on it cause it's original, just need to work on it more. The coloring and lighting needs more work aswell as it's abit bright for some reason, was probably the blending you did for a stock image that made it abit brighter than needed. Decent wall overall, just need to simplify it cause there's too much going on in this.

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If i took out the fire behind orton, would that help?
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lee lee i disagree with you completely
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If i took out the fire behind orton, would that help?
I think my issue is your placement and blending of your BG, can see everything that's applied in this, so just have to do a better job blending and coloring. And to the comment above, I was giving my comments/opinions on what I thought of this and what I think he can improve on to make him better, not posting to go against your comment. Everyone is not going to think the same, if so then all the comments would be basically the same.

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This is pretty weak, it needs a lot of clean-up, I think you got carried away with achieving certain visual effects that lead to such an overcrowded and displeasing wallpaper. I also feel like you just grabbed a stock image, made some minor adjustments and made it your background considering the quality of the text, blending and everything else that is at play here. You've more or less 'over-burned' the piece, the text while clearly understandable the effect you're going for once again is just too overdone and you're just ending up with an extremely messy piece.

The colors are too harsh, the placements are not right, these are all really amateur mistakes and I can only suggest that you look at wallpapers from experienced designers for inspiration/ideas and work from there onwards, it'd be better if you scout pieces from major graphic sites aside from just this community or other such smaller ones where graphics aren't necessarily the focus.

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ok, I actually agree that the colors are too harsh. I'll repost an edit that takes what you said into consideration in a couple minutes. thanks ;)
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