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Entrance Video Exhibition Jaedynr5 vs. Hardy Boy Editz

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Leelee

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Entrance Video Exhibition
Jaedynr5 vs. Hardy Boy Editz



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Voting Ends October 10th
 
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stsmvs

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Jaedynr5

Synching - 1/10
Pacing - 1/10
Clip Selection - 3/10
Presentation/Aesthetic - 3/10
Overall Entertainment - 2/10


From watching this I can see you are fairly new to editing. I think the best route for you to take is learning the basics of editing and learning how to make your video look more clean in general playing with some CCs etc. The nameplate was a pretty dope though the editing is the main part of making the video great. It all comes overtime and it takes loads of practice too get better. Maybe have a look at the highlight reel section and practice with some cut down footage. Hope you don't view this feedback in a negative way as everyone is new at some point. Look forward to seeing you grow as an editor.


Hardy Boy Editz

Synching - 4/10
Pacing - 4/10
Clip Selection - 2/10
Presentation/Aesthetic - 3/10
Overall Entertainment - 3/10


Overall this isn't bad. I would say that using Ortons old theme and style is a bit overdone at this point, and completely ripping the style of it comes off as lazy. Your syncing is on/off throughout the video, which I feel isn't too much your fault from an editing perspective. This is because you over edited this. Try and let the clips breathe a little, don't have constant action shots, it makes it harder to see what is going on in the actual video because of how much is going on at once. The CC is nice but you should tone it down a little, maybe play with the contrast and lighting just so the video doesn't feel too bright. I don't have too much to say as you clearly have your basics down it's just a matter of working on those basics and focusing on making your video stand out more.

Hardy Boy Editz
 

Jaedynr5

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Jaedynr5

Synching - 1/10
Pacing - 1/10
Clip Selection - 3/10
Presentation/Aesthetic - 3/10
Overall Entertainment - 2/10


From watching this I can see you are fairly new to editing. I think the best route for you to take is learning the basics of editing and learning how to make your video look more clean in general playing with some CCs etc. The nameplate was a pretty dope though the editing is the main part of making the video great. It all comes overtime and it takes loads of practice too get better. Maybe have a look at the highlight reel section and practice with some cut down footage. Hope you don't view this feedback in a negative way as everyone is new at some point. Look forward to seeing you grow as an editor.


Hardy Boy Editz

Synching - 4/10
Pacing - 4/10
Clip Selection - 2/10
Presentation/Aesthetic - 3/10
Overall Entertainment - 3/10


Overall this isn't bad. I would say that using Ortons old theme and style is a bit overdone at this point, and completely ripping the style of it comes off as lazy. Your syncing is on/off throughout the video, which I feel isn't too much your fault from an editing perspective. This is because you over edited this. Try and let the clips breathe a little, don't have constant action shots, it makes it harder to see what is going on in the actual video because of how much is going on at once. The CC is nice but you should tone it down a little, maybe play with the contrast and lighting just so the video doesn't feel too bright. I don't have too much to say as you clearly have your basics down it's just a matter of working on those basics and focusing on making your video stand out more.

Hardy Boy Editz
Thanks for the feedback. This actually was something I kinda threw together to get here in time tbh, I have better stuff on my channel
 

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Jaedynr5
Syncing - 4.5/10
Pacing - 4/10
Clip Selection - 4.5/10
Presentation/Aesthetic - 4/10
Overall Entertainment - 5/10

Hardy Boy Editz
Syncing - 6/10
Pacing - 6/10
Clip Selection - 6.5/10
Presentation/Aesthetic - 6/10
Overall Entertainment - 6/10


Vote: Hardy Boy Editz
 

TheGoofTroop

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Jardynr5-


Synching - 3/10
Pacing - 3/10
Clip Selection - 4/10
Presentation/Aesthetic -3 /10
Overall Entertainment - 4/10



Hardyboyz Editz-

Synching - 5/10
Pacing - 5/10
Clip Selection -6 /10
Presentation/Aesthetic -5 /10
Overall Entertainment - 5/10


My vote goes to "Hardyboyz editz".
 

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Jaedynr5 - Like sts mentioned, its noticeable that you dont have much experience with editing. But I dont think this video was amateurish, it definitely needs a lot of work, but I can see that you tried following some of the basics of editing.
Like the continuity with displaying a specific move in Swerves moveset. Or being able to show Swerves personality through the amount of different moves he does.
I would recommend you work more on your basics tho. Your syncing needs to improve. And I would highly suggest always getting high quality footage. It's not bad to use a few clips that may be below high quality, but it's always best the highest quality.
Realli y good work and please continue to showcase your work in these events. I'm sure with the feedback you get from others you'll improve fast.

Hardy Boy Editz - It seems like we get a video on the G.O.A.T every event here and I obviously dont mind it.
Honestly tho, this was a great titantron. The yellow tint looked awesome and it looked almost alike as the Orton titantron from 05.
You had some good syncing going on throughout the whole video. Although I do think there were times where the amount of clips you squeezed into one section to fit the beat of the song was a bit too much. Would have also liked to have seen a bit more expressions and poses. Also, a text graphic would have been cool to have seen here as well.
The structure looked good - the way you transitioned into second loop was pretty smooth.
I enjoyed this a lot!

Vote - Hardy Boy Editz
 

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Jaedynr5- I'm sensing some debutante vibes from this video...although you did bring up this was something to get completed on time. However, unlike other debutante videos, this wasn't anywhere in the rookie level. I love how you started off the video, you seem to know about syncing & when to use a certain type of clip. So at least for that, I do see promise in you.

Hardy Boy Editz- This was an enjoyable titantron video. Syncing was pretty good as the video went on...though it felt off at some points. Pacing was decent, but perhaps make a little more time for non-action clips. Gold effect was used well w/o ruining the quality of the clips nor coming off as oversaturated.

It's a tale of 2 videos. The debutante v. the knowledgeable rookie. In the end, only one vote can be sounded.

Vote: Hardy Boy Editz
 
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